My Mother-A Poem about to be Published in 'Stars in our Hearts' a book of poems

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By stestifie

My mom and I

My mom and I when I was 17
My mom and I when I was 17
Source: My Pics

Alright Hubbers, if you know me from these Hubs you would know that I love my mother. She is my rock in a world almost full to the brim with pebbles. I love her and this poem is for her. I just wrote it off the top of my head and submitted it. So I just got a letter yesterday saying that I am a semi-finalist and my poem will be published! I have never been published ever and I am so excited! My mother also cried when I read it to her, so I'm guessing she loved it. It was only supposed to be no more than 20 lines, so I did a nice even 10 lines for my poem.

Here it is:

My Mother © Stephanie Pyper

My Mother was both parents,
The dad I never had.
She always made the best sense,
Never said that he was bad.
Let me give her all my vents,
Like when I would get so mad.
She was also there when I had some dents,
And to fix them up a tad.
I love her more than anything in the world,
Much more so than my dad.

I hope I win and of course I will let everyone know!

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Frank Atanacio profile image

Frank Atanacio Level 8 Commenter 9 months ago

I hope you win too...

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stestifie Hub Author 9 months ago

Thank you Frank I hope I win too it would be great! But just being published is amazing too! =)

jami l. pereira 9 months ago

Cool poem , Good luck , hope you win !:) have a blessed day all day! :)

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stestifie Hub Author 9 months ago

Awww thank you so much Jami! I will need that good luck! You have a blessed day also :)

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ExoticHippieQueen Level 6 Commenter 9 months ago

Good luck and congratulations on being published!

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lord de cross 9 months ago

YOU should visit and read my poem for mom! Sorry for giving you an advanced insight. Loved it, liked it!

lord

JESSICA VICKERS MADDOX 4 months ago

I just wanted to say good luck and congratulations!I was also one of the semi-finalist and look forward to reading all the poetry in the new publication.

Sam 4 months ago

I heard this was a scam?!

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stestifie Hub Author 4 months ago

Sam, I am pretty sure it might have been. I put in my entry...which was from the heart but half assed at best. I then got my letter saying i was a finalist and blah blah. I sent no money (they asked twice for $50) for the book where my poem was supposedly in. I heard the book they put it in was not at all what they proposed. If it was a scam, eh I didn't pay any money. =P

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